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Sonnet of Summer

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For four years, your green eyes have haunted me,
Yet only in July was I possessed;
You drowned me in a salty summer sea,
And when I saw the sun, I was obsessed.
There are too many reasons I'm reluctant:
Too young for love, too old for childish whims--
Alas, I fear my heart has been corrupted
And so my light of reason has grown dim.
I thought that I had kept my heart protected,
I told myself that this was nothing new,
But you were something I had not expected,
And guarded heart or no, I fell for you.
   Too late I found you and your emerald gaze;
   Too soon will you be gone with summer's haze.
First sonnet ever. Write the first eight lines in 2 minutes, the last 6 took 2 hours, because I couldn't fit all my feelings into one sonnet, though I certainly tried.

It's never a good time to fall in love is it?
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unicornsisreal's avatar
This is a really beautiful sonnet! I like how neatly the words fit together! In three words: Tragic, awesome, mermaid-esque.